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The atlas song by ~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart:

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So just let go!!!
take those two hands from the world,
release it from your fingertips,
and please just let it roll,
Let Go,
you are not atlas my friend.
you are well in control,
so go on let it roll,
Let Go,
as soon as it hits the ground,
you've never let no one down,
let it roll, let it roll

Bear not the world upon your shoulders.
©2008 ~PearlHeart
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Just a few verses i wrote down about letting go of a situation in order to feel better about ones self.

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=underworldriver:iconunderworldriver: Mar 30, 2008, 6:58:49 PM
hm, not bad. Even though it doesn't feel very complete. Not bad at all.

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=VagueIndustries:iconVagueIndustries: Apr 11, 2008, 4:51:41 PM
Nice lyrics. What kind of tempo were you thinking of? It's got a 'The Feelers' feel to it. (NZ band, similar to Snow Patrol and The Fray)

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Queen of the Ponies.
I am completely aware of how shallow I am.
I is in your schools, teaching your childrens. No really, I am.
~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: Apr 11, 2008, 5:05:07 PM
Thank you :) ahhh how'd you guess, i was thinking floatly balard rock when i was writing this :) *such as snow patrol*
~The-Magic-Within:iconThe-Magic-Within: 1 day 22 hours ago
Nice. (I'll warn you now, I suck at commenting on song and poetry :D)

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To realise your own power ~ look for the magic within :blackrose:

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Rule Britannia!! :flaguk:
~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: 1 day 21 hours ago
haha no worries :D
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