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Simple Love by ~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


I like this girl,
She is nice,
She talks to me,
And sometimes we hug,
I like hugs,
She is very pretty,
When she smiles,
She makes me happy,
I want to spend more time with her,
So i can feel happy forever,
I hope she wants to be happy too,
So we can be happy together,
I like this girl.
©2008 ~PearlHeart
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Submitted: May 8
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I gave myself a little challenge to write the most meaningful poem in the most simplest and no frills way possible, this is what i came up with.

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~jessica35:iconjessica35: 5 days 17 hours ago
haha its so cute. Reminds me of something I wrote in grade 1 (but in a good way) !

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&&&no man is an island
~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: 5 days 17 hours ago
haha thank you :D yeah, that was the idea, i wanted to put it as simply as possible. sometimes we embellish words too much, i thought i'd give this a go
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