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Love poem by ~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Song


Come, Venus destroy me,
Dismantle my soul,
I’m no longer a man, no longer a whole.
I’ll lay down my arms,
I’ll crawl on all fours,
I’ll pull myself apart with my own jaws
I followed my heart,
To see where it lead me,
Mauled me, fucked me, bled me,

My unending love, my daily hell.
©2007-2008 ~PearlHeart
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I just wrote this in a brainstorm type of poetry moment.

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~Natsuko-of-Twilight:iconNatsuko-of-Twilight: Nov 9, 2007, 5:55:45 PM
Why, Venus? :P Just curious :3

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~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: Nov 10, 2007, 3:06:08 AM
Venus is the planet of love :D. Thanks for the fav :D
i was being sarcastic about the title hehe :P
~1JesusOfSuburbia:icon1JesusOfSuburbia: Nov 10, 2007, 3:16:57 AM Mood: Joy
I love it :)

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Kat

''Im just a musical prostitute,my dear!"-Freddie Mercury
~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: Nov 10, 2007, 3:33:06 AM
you do? awww yay! thank you :D
~1JesusOfSuburbia:icon1JesusOfSuburbia: Nov 10, 2007, 3:43:42 AM
yes, lol :D
my brainstorms are horrible, this is actually really good. :)

np

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Kat

''Im just a musical prostitute,my dear!"-Freddie Mercury
~PearlHeart:iconPearlHeart: Nov 10, 2007, 3:55:22 AM
Yay have cookie :cookie:

awww i'm sure they're not... well i'll just say i get my moments. my creative ability has been on hold for a while... i often get my poetry/writing in flashes, and then i cant stop working on it :( its kinda weird.

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~1JesusOfSuburbia:icon1JesusOfSuburbia: Nov 10, 2007, 4:11:37 AM
mmm cookie :P

If you saw them, lol..I can kind of relate, I can't write just when I want to, I have to wait for the muse to be there.. I've had writers block for the longest time, and I usually have no muse when my life is in good order, which it is right now, :/

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Kat

''Im just a musical prostitute,my dear!"-Freddie Mercury
~Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Nov 10, 2007, 7:30:25 AM
This reminds me of King Kong... how he loved her... but she didnt love him the same way :( :hug:

:heart: Amazingly written

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I've "been there, done that"
Got the bloody t-shirt!
I know suffering and i know pain.
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But it's all good! I'm still standing!
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~Natsuko-of-Twilight:iconNatsuko-of-Twilight: Nov 10, 2007, 2:15:54 PM
Ohhhhhh, I didn't know that ^^;. Welcomes :D!
:giggle:

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